Friday, October 24, 2008

Does This Sound 'Finished' to You?

Chiaroscuro

Like cataracts on ancient eyes,
a window opaque with mineral salts
prevents my clear vision of the world.
Can I say of my soul
I don't do windows?

2 comments:

Jennifer said...

only the poet can know that! :)

Heather and Jordan said...

One more sentence beginning with a simile/metaphor. I like the sound of the first sentence...